Thursday, May 24, 2012

No Pain...

She had touched his heart. He gasped, barely able to breathe. The warmth of his blood surged through. It was like he had been cut open, but he felt no pain. It was like being pinned to the stillness. He lay there motionless, drowning into oblivion, into darkness, slowly....
Then she said....
"Mam, please come and see my dissection!! I think my frog is dead."

38 comments:

  1. wow. great spin. keep at it, my friend.

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    1. Thank you so much Subhorup.. :)

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  2. Ha ha when i read ‘pinned to stillness’ i actually thought of a frog on the dissection table ! Nice :)

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    1. hehehehe!! Thank youuuu... :))

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  3. I toh got all senti only..........Knight is pinned to the blog :)

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    1. Exactly.. poor froggie.. what I wanted to convey.. :)

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  5. Hahhaaa!!! Loved it!!! Now THATS an angle I wouldnt have ever been able to think of!

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    1. hahaha!!! I can say the same about your 55 fictions.. :)

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  6. Ha ha ha!

    Waise..just wondering.. .aren't frogs at the dissection table supposed to be already dead?? I mean... hamare college mein tho... they used to be pehle se dead.

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    1. I was a zoology grad Sri..There was an exercise called live dissection. Where you cut open the a live animal, and record its heart beat. Abominable exrecise... I refused to do it and fought quite a battle to get it stopped.. Thankfully.. its over now.. :)

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  7. Just thought of this... what a relief ki woh frog prince waale fairy tale ke time, there was no such dissection :-D

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    1. hahahaha!! Tab bhi hote the.. just that the princess wasn't perverted enuf to try something of the sort.. :D

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  8. Mating season begins in monsoons..and decapitating season begins now???!!!:-D LOL...Good one..LOved it...

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    1. yeah!! And profile pic changing season as well? :D
      Thanks ya.. glad you like it..

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  9. Uff... it was just a frog :P

    Nice twist!


    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  10. I thank my stars we didn't have to do this the year we passed out. I'd always feared that one day I'd have to. :)

    Like the pathos in the apparently matter-of-fact statement 'I think my frog is dead'

    p.s: coincidentally, my latest post is a set of 5 short fictions/55-ish.

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    1. :) You really should be glad about that.. :)
      Thanks.. will chek out your blog now..

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  11. The first cut is the deepest!:)

    Short and sweet ... Lab of the soul?

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    1. :) haha! Thanks;;
      Lab of the Soul?

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  12. Now that is good twist .. Oh boy I killed a lot of those and my teacher was never happy with it ..

    Bikram's

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