Thursday, May 24, 2012

No Pain...

She had touched his heart. He gasped, barely able to breathe. The warmth of his blood surged through. It was like he had been cut open, but he felt no pain. It was like being pinned to the stillness. He lay there motionless, drowning into oblivion, into darkness, slowly....
Then she said....
"Mam, please come and see my dissection!! I think my frog is dead."
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  1. Anonymous24 May 2012 at 09:04

    wow. great spin. keep at it, my friend.

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  2. AmitAag24 May 2012 at 09:26

    ...terrific, Rohu!

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  3. Anonymous24 May 2012 at 10:13

    Ha ha when i read ‘pinned to stillness’ i actually thought of a frog on the dissection table ! Nice :)

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  4. quixotic.knight24 May 2012 at 12:03

    I toh got all senti only..........Knight is pinned to the blog :)

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  5. phatichar24 May 2012 at 13:56

    *croak* !!

    :D Superrrrr

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  6. Jayashree Srivatsan24 May 2012 at 14:58

    Loved it :) poor froggie !

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    1. Rohini25 May 2012 at 00:45

      Exactly.. poor froggie.. what I wanted to convey.. :)

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  7. magiceye24 May 2012 at 16:09

    :) brilliant!

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  8. Shreya24 May 2012 at 17:23

    Hahhaaa!!! Loved it!!! Now THATS an angle I wouldnt have ever been able to think of!

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    1. Rohini25 May 2012 at 00:46

      hahaha!!! I can say the same about your 55 fictions.. :)

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  9. Srini24 May 2012 at 20:46

    Ha ha ha!

    Waise..just wondering.. .aren't frogs at the dissection table supposed to be already dead?? I mean... hamare college mein tho... they used to be pehle se dead.

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    1. Rohini25 May 2012 at 00:48

      I was a zoology grad Sri..There was an exercise called live dissection. Where you cut open the a live animal, and record its heart beat. Abominable exrecise... I refused to do it and fought quite a battle to get it stopped.. Thankfully.. its over now.. :)

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  10. Srini24 May 2012 at 20:47

    Just thought of this... what a relief ki woh frog prince waale fairy tale ke time, there was no such dissection :-D

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    1. Rohini25 May 2012 at 00:49

      hahahaha!! Tab bhi hote the.. just that the princess wasn't perverted enuf to try something of the sort.. :D

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  11. Rahul24 May 2012 at 20:57

    Mating season begins in monsoons..and decapitating season begins now???!!!:-D LOL...Good one..LOved it...

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    1. Rohini25 May 2012 at 00:50

      yeah!! And profile pic changing season as well? :D
      Thanks ya.. glad you like it..

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  12. Blasphemous Aesthete24 May 2012 at 22:13

    Uff... it was just a frog :P

    Nice twist!


    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  13. CD!!!25 May 2012 at 09:34

    hehe.....Poor frog :D

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  14. Nitin Jain25 May 2012 at 10:10

    that was cunning :)

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  15. Anonymous25 May 2012 at 10:34

    ha ha.. good one.. :D

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  16. Amropali25 May 2012 at 13:03

    I thank my stars we didn't have to do this the year we passed out. I'd always feared that one day I'd have to. :)

    Like the pathos in the apparently matter-of-fact statement 'I think my frog is dead'

    p.s: coincidentally, my latest post is a set of 5 short fictions/55-ish.

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    1. Rohini27 May 2012 at 00:43

      :) You really should be glad about that.. :)
      Thanks.. will chek out your blog now..

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  17. Jayadev Menon26 May 2012 at 02:09

    The first cut is the deepest!:)

    Short and sweet ... Lab of the soul?

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  18. Bikram26 May 2012 at 15:08

    Now that is good twist .. Oh boy I killed a lot of those and my teacher was never happy with it ..

    Bikram's

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  19. Mak27 May 2012 at 13:08

    Hahahahah good one

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  20. Anonymous28 May 2012 at 17:51

    what a twist..LOL!

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