हसरतों की कब्र में , एक रूह दफन हो गयी ..
वोह आग को लगा गले , एक आह ओढ़े सो गयी ...
आंसुओं से आसमान के , धुल गयी ज़मीन तेरी ..
कि बादलों की साजिशों में , घुल गयी ज़मीन तेरी ...
किस फ़कीर कि मज़ार पे , अब चादरें चधाऊँ मैं ?
किस शौख के बाज़ार में , दिलचस्पियाँ जताऊँ मैं ?
पुछा जो कल कि रात से , वोह बोली क्या बताऊँ मैं ?
क्यूँ इस सवेरे के आगे , फिर आज सर झुकाऊँ मैं ?
क्यूँ आज जलती लौ से लड़ पड़ी हैं यह हवाएं फिर ?
क्यूँ अब दुआ की राह देखती हैं यह दवाएं फिर ?
भूले हुए गुनाहों की , क्यूँ मिल रहीं सजाएं फिर ?
क्यूँ हंस रहीं हैं आज रेगिस्तान की फिज़ाएं फिर ?
एक आस मेरी थी कभी , तनहाइयों में खो गयी ,
एक सांस मेरी थी कभी , गवाहियों में खो गयी ,
एक रात कि जो बात थी , कहानियों में खो गयी ,
एक अक्स है , छुपाने को , परछाइयों में खो गयी .
Wah Wah. Tussi Kamal kar ditta !!!!
ReplyDeleteLooooved it !!!!
Thanks Anupam! :))
Deleteवाह क्या बात है
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Thanks a lot Arun! :)
Deletelovely :) bohot khub :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Gautam.. :)
Deletegreat great great.superbly written
ReplyDeleteHey Thanks for dropping by.. :)
DeleteEk aas meri thi kabhi, tanhaiyon mein kho gayi - wah Rohu..làjawaab :)
ReplyDeleteHar ek lafz me gehraayi hai. Bohat khoob likha hai.
Thanks a lot Mak! :) Very generous of you!
Deletewah! wah! ekdum ghazal ki tone hai... wonderful...
ReplyDeleteHey! Thanks a lot.. :)
DeleteI am SPEECHLESS!! Normally, I never comment on poetry because you can say that I am dumb to understand poetry.
ReplyDeleteBut this piece gave me goosebumps! I LOVED it!
Thank you so much CD!! This has made me truly glad!! :)))
DeleteWhat wonderful lines you create. I am spellbound.
ReplyDeleteI am glad Neeraj. Thanks for dropping by.. :)
Deletei enjoyed reading this one my friend.
ReplyDeleteEk aas meri thi kabhi, tanhaiyon mein kho gayi,...
What beautiful line... Thanks for sharing.
I appreciate your comment on the blog about 'Is Human nature Basically Selfish' and have replied to your comment to. Thanks.
Shashi
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.in/2012/05/talking-point-is-human-nature-basically.html
At Twitter @VerseEveryDay
Thank you sir! Yours was a truly delightful post.
Deleteghalib apne kabr me muskura raha hoga,
ReplyDelete"rohu" ki pankhtiya sunke wahi bhar raha hoga...
Aww Princess! You are unbelievably sweet!! Thank you my love!!
DeleteBEAUTIFUL post Rohini :)
ReplyDeleteThough the notion is sad, but the expression is beautiful.
Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete
Coming from you. it means a lot! Thanks a ton!! :)
DeleteOh Boy !!! This poetry is so sad . Rula diya phirse . Its more like ::
ReplyDeleteHasraton ki kabr mein, ek ROHU dafn ho gayi......... But sriously, its awesomely awesome . I have to start writing again .heheh
hahahahaha!! Rohu dafn ho gayi!! :D ROFL!!
DeleteaND thanks so much buddy.. I am very glad you liked it!! :D
and you do have to start writing again! :)
"Ek aas meri thi kabhi, tanhaiyon mein kho gayi,
ReplyDeleteEk saans meri thi kabhi, gawahiyon mein kho gayi "
beautiful poem , rohu !
( what a cute name, ek type ki fish hoti hai na?? :D )
And lovely header photu :-)
:)) Thanks a lot Komal!
Deleteyeah Rohu is a macchi.. Labeo rohita :)
Its my pet name for Rohini...
This is great work....Fantastic piece of hindi poetry...
ReplyDeleteWould love to read on more on the same lines...
All the best. :-)
Thanks a ton Kunal! :)
DeleteStunning lines those. I'd humbly suggest you to use http://www.google.com/transliterate for Devnagari script. It should enhance the beauty of your poem.
ReplyDeleteThanks a million tons! :)
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