Sunday, May 06, 2012

Musings..





हसरतों  की  कब्र  में , एक  रूह  दफन  हो  गयी ..
वोह  आग  को  लगा  गले , एक  आह  ओढ़े  सो  गयी ...
आंसुओं  से  आसमान  के , धुल  गयी  ज़मीन  तेरी ..
कि बादलों की  साजिशों  में , घुल  गयी  ज़मीन  तेरी ...

किस  फ़कीर  कि  मज़ार  पे , अब  चादरें  चधाऊँ  मैं ?
किस  शौख के  बाज़ार  में , दिलचस्पियाँ  जताऊँ  मैं ?
पुछा  जो  कल  कि रात  से , वोह  बोली  क्या  बताऊँ  मैं ?
क्यूँ  इस  सवेरे  के  आगे , फिर  आज  सर  झुकाऊँ  मैं ?

क्यूँ  आज  जलती  लौ  से  लड़  पड़ी  हैं  यह  हवाएं  फिर ?
क्यूँ  अब  दुआ   की  राह  देखती  हैं  यह  दवाएं  फिर ?
 भूले  हुए  गुनाहों  की , क्यूँ  मिल  रहीं  सजाएं  फिर ?
क्यूँ  हंस  रहीं  हैं  आज  रेगिस्तान  की  फिज़ाएं फिर ?

एक  आस  मेरी  थी  कभी , तनहाइयों  में  खो  गयी ,
एक  सांस  मेरी  थी  कभी , गवाहियों  में  खो  गयी ,
एक  रात  कि जो  बात  थी , कहानियों  में  खो  गयी ,
एक  अक्स  है , छुपाने  को , परछाइयों में  खो  गयी .















31 comments:

  1. Wah Wah. Tussi Kamal kar ditta !!!!

    Looooved it !!!!

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  2. वाह क्या बात है
    अरुन (arunsblog.in)

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  3. great great great.superbly written

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    1. Hey Thanks for dropping by.. :)

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  4. Ek aas meri thi kabhi, tanhaiyon mein kho gayi - wah Rohu..làjawaab :)
    Har ek lafz me gehraayi hai. Bohat khoob likha hai.

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    1. Thanks a lot Mak! :) Very generous of you!

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  5. wah! wah! ekdum ghazal ki tone hai... wonderful...

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  6. I am SPEECHLESS!! Normally, I never comment on poetry because you can say that I am dumb to understand poetry.

    But this piece gave me goosebumps! I LOVED it!

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    1. Thank you so much CD!! This has made me truly glad!! :)))

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  7. What wonderful lines you create. I am spellbound.

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    1. I am glad Neeraj. Thanks for dropping by.. :)

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  8. i enjoyed reading this one my friend.
    Ek aas meri thi kabhi, tanhaiyon mein kho gayi,...

    What beautiful line... Thanks for sharing.

    I appreciate your comment on the blog about 'Is Human nature Basically Selfish' and have replied to your comment to. Thanks.

    Shashi
    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.in/2012/05/talking-point-is-human-nature-basically.html
    At Twitter @VerseEveryDay

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    1. Thank you sir! Yours was a truly delightful post.

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  9. ghalib apne kabr me muskura raha hoga,
    "rohu" ki pankhtiya sunke wahi bhar raha hoga...

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    1. Aww Princess! You are unbelievably sweet!! Thank you my love!!

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  10. BEAUTIFUL post Rohini :)

    Though the notion is sad, but the expression is beautiful.

    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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    1. Coming from you. it means a lot! Thanks a ton!! :)

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  11. Oh Boy !!! This poetry is so sad . Rula diya phirse . Its more like ::
    Hasraton ki kabr mein, ek ROHU dafn ho gayi......... But sriously, its awesomely awesome . I have to start writing again .heheh

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    1. hahahahaha!! Rohu dafn ho gayi!! :D ROFL!!
      aND thanks so much buddy.. I am very glad you liked it!! :D
      and you do have to start writing again! :)

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  12. "Ek aas meri thi kabhi, tanhaiyon mein kho gayi,
    Ek saans meri thi kabhi, gawahiyon mein kho gayi "
    beautiful poem , rohu !
    ( what a cute name, ek type ki fish hoti hai na?? :D )
    And lovely header photu :-)

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    1. :)) Thanks a lot Komal!
      yeah Rohu is a macchi.. Labeo rohita :)
      Its my pet name for Rohini...

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  14. This is great work....Fantastic piece of hindi poetry...
    Would love to read on more on the same lines...
    All the best. :-)

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  15. Stunning lines those. I'd humbly suggest you to use http://www.google.com/transliterate for Devnagari script. It should enhance the beauty of your poem.

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    1. Thanks a million tons! :)
      done!!

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