Thursday, June 21, 2012

Letter from the Sea




     

Seep through these cracks
And flood my day
Kill all the truth
Push the dreams away

Kiss this night
Let the moon suggest
How all our fears
Can be laid to rest

Dance through the tides
And laugh again
Till pain makes way
For no more pain

Let my blood sink
In this lonely sand
On some unknown shore
Let my grave stand

Live this hour
With no breath planned
Come sing to the world
Come hold my hand…
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44 comments:

  1. magiceye21 June 2012 at 06:05

    Life so full of contradictions! Powerfully expressed!

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  2. Shashiprakash Saini21 June 2012 at 12:36

    बहुत सुन्दर रचना

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  3. Jayashree Srivatsan21 June 2012 at 13:09

    Live this hour with no breath planned...Wow!

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  4. Panchali21 June 2012 at 16:58

    passionate...persuasive...brilliant expressions! Loved this...

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    1. Rohini22 June 2012 at 00:28

      Thanks a bunch for the wonderful compliment.. :)

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  5. Bikram21 June 2012 at 17:47

    exactly live the HOUR.. loved reading it

    Bikram's

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  6. umashankar21 June 2012 at 20:30

    The last stanza lifts your poem like a surging wave.

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    1. Rohini22 June 2012 at 00:29

      Thanks a ton! your appreciation and feedback means a lot!!

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  7. Srini21 June 2012 at 21:01

    Now.. that can almost be set to music and sung...I can imagine it going really well with some light haunting guitar in the background...

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  8. TTT21 June 2012 at 21:13

    brilliant !

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  9. Shah Nawaz22 June 2012 at 11:09

    Beautiful!!!

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  10. Sia22 June 2012 at 14:09

    Beautiful!

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  11. Anupam Patra22 June 2012 at 16:22

    Lovely expression. Loved it.

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  12. Rahul22 June 2012 at 18:23

    Sublime!!!!:-)

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  13. Explorer Lens22 June 2012 at 19:56

    lovely read...:)

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  14. Mak22 June 2012 at 23:12

    Awesome !!!

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  15. Blasphemous Aesthete25 June 2012 at 23:23

    There will always be remembrances left, no, buried on the distant sands, which narrate stories when struck or blown. :)

    Nice post!


    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  16. phatichar27 June 2012 at 07:51

    Bhaari bharkam... :)

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  17. the little princess3 July 2012 at 12:06

    fancy the idea of the moon suggesting how to lay our fears to rest! lovely read!

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  18. Rohini14 July 2012 at 14:58

    :)

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  19. AVY29 July 2012 at 15:50

    Love the rythm here, it's easy to read.


    /Avy

    http://mymotherfuckedmickjagger.blogspot.com

    ♥

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  20. Jasmeet7 August 2012 at 22:47

    I cherish every line while reading , lovely work indeed!

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    1. Rohini16 September 2012 at 12:19

      Thats so very sweet and generous of you Jasmeet! really! thanks a million!! will put up the post soon!

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  21. Jayashree Srivatsan10 August 2012 at 05:14

    The last four lines were out of the world...Beautiful!

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    1. Rohini16 September 2012 at 12:18

      thanks a ton Jaish! I'm really glad u liked it! :)

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  22. phatichar4 September 2012 at 16:06

    Kuch samajh aaya ke yoon hi muskura diye :p

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