Thursday, June 21, 2012

Letter from the Sea




     

Seep through these cracks
And flood my day
Kill all the truth
Push the dreams away

Kiss this night
Let the moon suggest
How all our fears
Can be laid to rest

Dance through the tides
And laugh again
Till pain makes way
For no more pain

Let my blood sink
In this lonely sand
On some unknown shore
Let my grave stand

Live this hour
With no breath planned
Come sing to the world
Come hold my hand…

45 comments:

  1. Life so full of contradictions! Powerfully expressed!

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    1. hey.. It sure is.. thanks a lot.. :)

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  2. बहुत सुन्दर रचना

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  3. Live this hour with no breath planned...Wow!

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    1. :) Merci...Glad you liked it..

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  4. passionate...persuasive...brilliant expressions! Loved this...

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    1. Thanks a bunch for the wonderful compliment.. :)

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  5. exactly live the HOUR.. loved reading it

    Bikram's

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  6. The last stanza lifts your poem like a surging wave.

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    1. Thanks a ton! your appreciation and feedback means a lot!!

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  7. Now.. that can almost be set to music and sung...I can imagine it going really well with some light haunting guitar in the background...

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    1. Really? shud try sometime then?? :)

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  8. There will always be remembrances left, no, buried on the distant sands, which narrate stories when struck or blown. :)

    Nice post!


    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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    1. Yup...very true.. :-) thanks..

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  9. una felice giornata a Te...ciao

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  10. fancy the idea of the moon suggesting how to lay our fears to rest! lovely read!

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  11. I cherish every line while reading , lovely work indeed!

    A surprise gift , you might like :)
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    1. Thats so very sweet and generous of you Jasmeet! really! thanks a million!! will put up the post soon!

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  12. The last four lines were out of the world...Beautiful!

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    1. thanks a ton Jaish! I'm really glad u liked it! :)

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