Saturday, March 31, 2012

Queries of Anonymity


To whom shall I bare
my little piece of earth?
Dedicate my humble prayer
to whose blessed birth?
Shall I proceed to drown
In salty oceans grim?
Or should again set sail
Through the winds of purple whim?
Should I lose once more
To the wars fought within?
Or tell my raging core
To make a virtue of every sin?
Shall I stand on this cliff
To wake up the drowsy land?
Shall you never know my if
And the tremors of my hand?
What keeps me from you,
These dreams and the rest?
Then will they burn my wings
And push me from my nest?


 Am I the letter you never sent?
Am I the unopened book?
Am I the forgotten home,
You never turned back to look?
Are these my veins
With breathless blood
Those in haste run to my heart?
Beseech you to let me
Love yet again
Before we to oblivion depart…




22 comments:

  1. Beautifully written :) First time on your blog."Beseech you to let me love yet again before we to oblivion depart" Awesome :) :D

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  2. Thank you my love.. :) I am hopeless at poetry but still shameless at tormenting readers... And then good people like you encourage me to do so.. :)

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    1. Oh please :) I don't tell people it's nice, unless or until i really like this! Bleh, this is seriously good :D

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    2. Ab now, because you are an amazing writer yourself, I'm compelled to take is as a huge compliment.. :) Thanks a ton!

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    3. Hopeless at poetry ? I doubt that :O Amazing :)

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  3. I really detest reading poems which are not paragraphed. I had to copy in word and pg it... goodshit! :)

    And... picture window template :):)


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    Rohan Shankar http://cryptic-vsisions.blogspot.in/

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  4. Crap. I dont know how i spelt it wrong. its http://cryptic-visions.blogspot.com

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  5. This is a find write. I enjoyed.

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  6. Hmmm...interesting write up, loved it :)

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    1. Thank you Gautam.. very kind of you.. :)

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  7. beautiful!!
    *before we to oblivion depart* so true
    loved it!

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  8. ....but hopes stay immortal as we continue the journey of life and love and hopes...
    gr8
    cheers

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  9. Awesome one Rohu... loved it... way to go :)

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    1. Thanks a ton Seema.. your appreciation means a lot.. :)

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  10. Serene and idyllic...
    ...asks a series of questions but never provides an answer.
    Beautifully composed.

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